Guess Who's Wanted?
I am the fur that covers up your body
The blood that jogs in your veins
The comfort that conquers your pain
I am the bed you rest your skull in
The fat you juggle your pants in
The life you sucked your world in
I am the caffeine that meets your darkness
The pill that drowns your nightmares
The glow that guides your heartless soul towards brightness
I am your greatest excitement…
Your finest diamond
The pleasure that seizes your climax
I am the glory, the love, the sadness…
The hero that brings you back from madness
I am….
Gone!
The blood that jogs in your veins
The comfort that conquers your pain
I am the bed you rest your skull in
The fat you juggle your pants in
The life you sucked your world in
I am the caffeine that meets your darkness
The pill that drowns your nightmares
The glow that guides your heartless soul towards brightness
I am your greatest excitement…
Your finest diamond
The pleasure that seizes your climax
I am the glory, the love, the sadness…
The hero that brings you back from madness
I am….
Gone!
posted by The pie fairy @ 4:19 PM
14 Comments:
This is so beautiful and deep.
But so sad and heartbreaking.
"Gone!"? :(
It doesn't seem fair
It was perfect like a fairy tale
And in the back of my mind,
You will always be there
This is my fav stanza:
I am your greatest excitement...
Your finest diamond
The pleasure that seizes your climax
thanx for sharing this :)
I likee. as I said b4, u write like an angel :) so keep writing GMW
I LOVE IT :) very nice..mashalla
:)~
move over moe...guess we have another writer in town :P hehe u both rock! ;*
hanan:
thanks :) I'm kindda aiming for that :P
l'sbrain:
"in the back of [your] mind [I] will always be there" >> this could be another ending :P but naaa mine is cooler ;)
I'm being realistic. Glad u liked it :)
Coquette:
aww wanasaaa ur opinion means alot :P thanks b
shady q80:
you are? ;)
gone where'??
dr lost:
somewhere I belong :)
just amazing ..
thnx
intense.. I loved it.. Bravo :)
ling-bling:
thanks sweets :)
Diigmaa:
I do what I can ;p thanks
girlmeetsworld,
are u really gone? :( i thought it was just a poem!
l's brain:
no I'm not :) I've been busy lately :( but I will write something new inshallah soon. It might be work related :P
enough poemssssssssssssss ;ppp
dr.lost:
ur my inspiration :P
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