Is That Alright?
Am I capable of writing something from the heart? I don’t know! It’s been too long since I have said anything sincere. This room smells like shit! What is that? :SI realized I have not changed a bit since I was 20? I’m still the same “selfish and eccentric” :P that’s what I was told, but no I don’t think I’m selfish. I’m just trying to be happy. I have been searching for something for so long but it seems that it is out of reach. Do you blame me for giving up? Or have you already given up with me?
Let me tell u a lil story that happened a while back to someone I consider my hero :P
One dark night she found herself in ecstasy. Everything was still.
There was no soul, no breath, no one to wake her
She questioned herself: is this imaginary or is this real? For it was unusual and unclear
He asked her "what is your name?"
She answered: You found me so you tell me, and in Time you will know me
He laughed and said "my name I will not tell, until you release your fear and open your shell"
She gently smiled and said: In Time I will tell, but what he did not know is that she was in hell!
Her endurance could not stay still.
Her mind asked her "what is happening to you? You seem to have lost control!"
She could not answer. She was yearning for more ;)
As he left, a moment of silence had struck her…
Days passed, and months went by while she was burning with desire
Her heart cried "Put Out this Fire! Put Out this Fire!"
Eighteen months went by and their love lifted them higher
She asked him: Am I yours and are you mine?
He answered "yes my love, for there is no other I desire"
With her spirit she embraced him
Then she closed her eyes to witness tomorrow
One condemned evening he came to her with fainted horror
He told her "we must separate my love it is against my power"
She thought to herself: What merciless soul wants us to be apart, this must be a dreadful dream, and I must wake up from this terror
This girl needs an ending to her aching tale.
O glorious God her life has grown pale
Have you any clue of the pain she is going through?
What could have been that separated those two?
posted by The pie fairy @ 5:36 PM
13 Comments:
the story was beautiful
made my day
thanks
very nice... :) start writing stories for real.. you may get one published one day.. :))
that was nice :) who is ur hero? :P
it all has to end ...nothing lasts :) for those who experience love...they should be thankful and glad that they did...some people search a life time to know how it feels...but never do
Lovely ^___^
hyde:
always a pleasure :) welcome to my blog n thank you for your sweet comment.
dr.lost:
thanks alot "foo". I'll think about it ;)
Coquette:
ain't love a kick in the head? :P
I still have hope :( one day inshallah it'll happen.
psycho girl:
thanks love ;) glad u liked it
selfish and eccentric. So says wise Chinese tablemat :)
Is it just me or do you people see the sexual imagery as well? Open your shell ... put out this fire ...
But then it's 18 months. That's a double term of pregnancy. hmmm. can't put this together. Impregnated? Twice?
Yes I know. It's just my sick mind. That and that stupid Freud who puts these thoughts in my head.
Ok now seriously. Girl this is really good. You should write more of these thoughts/fantasies/stories.
When is the next coming?
hanan:
hehehe it's just you :P
It is you interpretation that makes it complete ;)Haven't you learned anything from reader-response?
Wooow liked it
I guess we have many good writers in the blogworld... I guess u're on of them 4 sure :)
nice me likee :)
zizo:
awwww thanks :) kobar rasy shwaya :P
Panic:
thanks a-hola :P
great style .. i loved it!
"O glorious God" Girlmeetsworld writes like an angel :)
l's brain:
thank u sweets :) wanasa someone just quoted me lol
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